
Re: Very Interesting Information from Halo: Uprising
(SPOILERS AHEAD)
Ackerson & the key of Osanalan, I thought that was pretty funny--like he was leading them to some ornament in a mall or something, I wonder what it is.
I also couldn't help but feel self-conscious (in a funny, ribbing way) when the brute is bellowing out to the tremendous crowd "Lead us to the the key! You will be rewarded!" The wording of "You will be rewarded" regarding a key to a forerunner structure sounded a little familiar . . .
I actually thought the writing, on a sentence-by-sentence, character-building level was pretty solid. I was impressed with it, low-key on MC as it was. And it was funny when the voice asks from out-of-frame "you got a gun?" We expect MC and then next page its . . . well, not. Lots of intelligent pacing throughout.